1. Yesterday, I learned that in a thesis statement you can't just say something is "awesome" and not go into detail on the things that make it "awesome". Also your thesis has to be worth arguing about. What I mean by that is like when you give detailed facts on the things that make your subject "awesome", you have to argue about why they are awesome.
2. A strong Introductory paragraph.....hmm, I am not very good at making introductory paragraphs. Actually, I was NEVER good at making introductory paragraphs! I'm not sure what makes a good intro. paragraph so I'm not sure how to answer this question.
2. A strong Introductory paragraph.....hmm, I am not very good at making introductory paragraphs. Actually, I was NEVER good at making introductory paragraphs! I'm not sure what makes a good intro. paragraph so I'm not sure how to answer this question.